first paragraph you used the word "had" make it "has" since eats, is present tense. no comma after the word "among" in first paragraph. also in first paragraph, you need to add a comma after "people eat". first two sentences in paragraph 2 need a comma. paragraph 3 "it is also safe to say" you need a comma after the word say. "within the last decade" you need a comma after decade. the rest looks fine. and wonderful job! i wrote a report almost identical to it. :)